Monday, February 27, 2012

Showcase Post

My three favorite posts are The Scream Tour, Hunger games Blog out.And Writing assignment. Each of these posts showed how I became a better writer because in the beginning  I didn't know how to make my stories make since or how to make my stories stand out more. But during the year I became a better writer and my writing makes more since now.

The post that best reflects my creativity is the story about the Older elders point of view in Tell Tale Heart it was creative because instead of just telling about the story I came from the point of view of the Old Elder and about his eye and stuff . I knew that when i wrote this post I will become a better writer.

The post that best shows evidence of my growth as a writer is The Scream tour. I chose this story to show I became a better writer because I just put a story about me going to a concert. And at first I really was stuck and didn't know what to write about but now when I write posts I  know what to write about. As i look back  over my posts i really have gotten better.

The post that explains I am a learner or thinker is a story about me going to New York it shows I am a thinker because I knew what I was going to write about in this post I had it all planned out and the story shows I am a thinker and a learner because in the beginning of the year I didn't make any since in my writting but know I do.http://ariel-osborne.blogspot.com/2012/02/scream-tour.htmlhttp://ariel-osborne.blogspot.com/2011/11/hunger-games-blogout.htmlhttp://ariel-osborne.blogspot.com/2012/01/writting-asignment.html

Thursday, February 2, 2012

The Scream Tour

My cousins and I went to the Concert called the scream tour in Columbia, South Carolina.  The concert included Mindless behavior,Omg Girlz,Hamilton Parks, Lil trill, Jacob lattimore and Diggy Simmons. This Was going to be the best concert. The concert took place at a big building called the Township auditorium. Once we arrived at the concert we sat down . It was so many girls their .  I was so excited about seeing mindless behavior . When we were at the concert it got very quiet and then some girls got on stage and were great. I was just ready to see mindless behavior. So then after that group  this young star called Lil trill performed the crowd went crazy. We were still waiting for mindless behavior .

After Lil trill and the first group were great . Omg Girlz then Hamilton Parks they were  great also but i was waiting to see mindless behavior.Diggy  Simmons did great all the girls went so crazy .Then finally Mindless behavior was about to be up. When mindless behavior performed i was so excited because that is who i wanted to see the whole crowd went so crazy . Their were people trying to run on stage. Mindless behavior did very good. I was so excited .  I was going to run on stage but their were too many Body guards.

 Ray ray , prodigy, Roc royal and Princeton The announcer called their names as they stepped on stage . I couldnt believe that i was in the same building as mindless behavior it was so crazy . The concert was  fantastic .  The  concert was over and everybody left.  Girls were still acting crazy.  They all was screaming . But  the concert was a concert to remember and i will never forget.